I used to think my thoughts were worthless
I used to think my mind was dull
I used to think my opinion powerless
I used to believe that I was small
I used to think my options were limited
I used to think I had nothing to give
I used to think I was inhibited
That was before I learned how to live
To live is to know that you were created
To reveal something that no one else can
To get out what inside of you is inflated
Is what He devised as the plan
I hate being 'this guy' all the time, but for future reference, the last four lines are all part of the same sentence. Thus there should be but one period. The first three lines would best be punctuated with a semicolon; although a simple comma would be sufficient
ReplyDeleteI prefer not to punctuate my poems if it can be helped
heh. I'm very aware that it is improperly punctuated. I like it that way. Thanks for the input tho!
ReplyDeleteokay, i decided to heed your advice
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